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marsbarz88

Posts: 4124 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 21
 | Subject: Marshmallow Fluff Sat Jun 07, 2008 5:57 pm | |
| Title: Marshmallow Fluff Pairing: Logan/Veronica Rating: NC-17 Spoilers: Set during the summer after 2x22. Word Count: 3,552 Summary: All cynicism and glass half-emptiness aside for once – maybe there was something good underneath the debris of ruined lives and bloodshed…something worthwhile, worth saving. Disclaimer: I don’t own Veronica Mars or any of the characters in the fic. A.N. 1: Written for the “Lost in the Dark” challenge at gogetem_bobcat. Kind of fluffy, not much plot here but there’s some character development or at least an attempt at it. :p EDIT: Figured I'd just post the link to the completed fic. Link.
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Posts: 2239 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 22 Location: Logan's lap
 | Subject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:25 pm | |
| Awww, she got her Pacey in the end.  Yeah Veronica cause it's sooo possible to not love Logan. Silly girl. Oh yeah, so like them not to official say they are back together. Those two are so damn good at avoiding conversation when they want to. Hehe, Cary Grant. Gotta love Cary. "Bachelor of Blackmail and Espionage” <----Veronica would ace that one. Awww, Veronica told him to go to the party and he didn't go. He's so sweet. Good lord how many "awww's" are you gonna get out of me. The whole "covering her heart" thing....Awwww. I want a Logan. "Spread 'em babe"<----Yeah, um......give me a minute. I'm kinda fantasizing about Logan/Me smut. Lord, Veronica, if the boy offers oral sex you say yes. I don't care if hes offering it in the middle of your school caffeteria. The answer is always YES!!! “See baby, you can’t fight it.” <----Veronica and me both lol “God, Logan. Please. Want you…inside of, of me,” <----I know the feeling Note to the author: Stop being such a baby. It was sweet & hot and I demand you finish it now! The queen has spoken. |
|  | | PrincessBella24

Posts: 2992 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 26 Location: Loganland, the happiest place on earth.
 | Subject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:33 pm | |
| I really liked it. It was sweet! The heart thing melted me, completly. Only Logan could make such a sexual move and have us all go AWWW. I really liked the Logan-chocolate combination. You cant go wrong w that one I like how playful it was, cause i really do love angst free smut. The tease of the smut you gave us (Evil) was seriously hot. Veronica is so stupid sometimes "Someone could walk by.."*says in a high pitch voice* Who cares! I really liked it, and im reaaaaaaaaaaaly hoping you dont stop there. |
|  | | marsbarz88

Posts: 4124 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 21
 | Subject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:39 pm | |
| | Admin wrote: | Awww, she got her Pacey in the end.
Yeah Veronica cause it's sooo possible to not love Logan. Silly girl.
Oh yeah, so like them not to official say they are back together. Those two are so damn good at avoiding conversation when they want to.
Hehe, Cary Grant. Gotta love Cary.
"Bachelor of Blackmail and Espionage” <----Veronica would ace that one.
Awww, Veronica told him to go to the party and he didn't go. He's so sweet.
Good lord how many "awww's" are you gonna get out of me. The whole "covering her heart" thing....Awwww. I want a Logan.
"Spread 'em babe"<----Yeah, um......give me a minute. I'm kinda fantasizing about Logan/Me smut.
Lord, Veronica, if the boy offers oral sex you say yes. I don't care if hes offering it in the middle of your school caffeteria. The answer is always YES!!!
“See baby, you can’t fight it.” <----Veronica and me both lol
“God, Logan. Please. Want you…inside of, of me,” <----I know the feeling
Note to the author: Stop being such a baby. It was sweet & hot and I demand you finish it now! The queen has spoken. |
Thanks for all the feedback.
Best. Cafeteria. Table. Ever.
It'll be done soon. |
|  | | marsbarz88

Posts: 4124 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 21
 | Subject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:41 pm | |
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|  | | PrincessBella24

Posts: 2992 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 26 Location: Loganland, the happiest place on earth.
 | Subject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:45 pm | |
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|  | | marsbarz88

Posts: 4124 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 21
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|  | | PrincessBella24

Posts: 2992 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 26 Location: Loganland, the happiest place on earth.
 | Subject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:14 pm | |
| | marsbarz88 wrote: | | PrincessBella24 wrote: | And apparently so are you. When you write
I really like the way you described everything. Your writing always has that. Like when you say "She watched the fire as the embers flared and flamed, the image reflecting back through the mirror of her own azure orbs" That´s pretty perfect.
Oh yeah, that has enough angst fo a year.
Uhhhh, i cant wait. |
Don't compliment remember, its awkward, only when you do it though.
Thanks.
Uh huh.
Good, then you can comment on lj for me right? I need at least 1 reply.  |
Yeah, idk why tho Well, lets say i was talking about this other writer. Betty. She is really good
I cannot enough.
Well, that´s a given, but i know i wont be the only one.  |
|  | | marsbarz88

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|  | | PrincessBella24

Posts: 2992 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 26 Location: Loganland, the happiest place on earth.
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|  | | marsbarz88

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|  | | PrincessBella24

Posts: 2992 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 26 Location: Loganland, the happiest place on earth.
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|  | | marsbarz88

Posts: 4124 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 21
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|  | | PrincessBella24

Posts: 2992 Join date: 2007-12-18 Age: 26 Location: Loganland, the happiest place on earth.
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