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PostSubject: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 5:57 pm

Title: Marshmallow Fluff
Pairing: Logan/Veronica
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Set during the summer after 2x22.
Word Count: 3,552
Summary: All cynicism and glass half-emptiness aside for once – maybe there was something good underneath the debris of ruined lives and bloodshed…something worthwhile, worth saving.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Veronica Mars or any of the characters in the fic.
A.N. 1: Written for the “Lost in the Dark” challenge at gogetem_bobcat. Kind of fluffy, not much plot here but there’s some character development or at least an attempt at it. :p

EDIT: Figured I'd just post the link to the completed fic. Link.


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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:25 pm

Awww, she got her Pacey in the end. I love you

Rolling Eyes Yeah Veronica cause it's sooo possible to not love Logan. Silly girl.

Oh yeah, so like them not to official say they are back together. Those two are so damn good at avoiding conversation when they want to.

Hehe, Cary Grant. Gotta love Cary.

"Bachelor of Blackmail and Espionage” <----Veronica would ace that one.

Awww, Veronica told him to go to the party and he didn't go. He's so sweet.

Good lord how many "awww's" are you gonna get out of me. The whole "covering her heart" thing....Awwww. I want a Logan.

"Spread 'em babe"<----Yeah, um......give me a minute. I'm kinda fantasizing about Logan/Me smut.

Lord, Veronica, if the boy offers oral sex you say yes. I don't care if hes offering it in the middle of your school caffeteria. The answer is always YES!!! lol!

“See baby, you can’t fight it.” <----Veronica and me both lol

“God, Logan. Please. Want you…inside of, of me,” <----I know the feeling lol!

Note to the author: Stop being such a baby. It was sweet & hot and I demand you finish it now! The queen has spoken.
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:33 pm

I really liked it. It was sweet! The heart thing melted me, completly. Only Logan could make such a sexual move and have us all go AWWW.
I really liked the Logan-chocolate combination. You cant go wrong w that one Razz
I like how playful it was, cause i really do love angst free smut.
The tease of the smut you gave us (Evil) was seriously hot. Veronica is so stupid sometimes "Someone could walk by.."*says in a high pitch voice* Who cares! Rolling Eyes
I really liked it, and im reaaaaaaaaaaaly hoping you dont stop there.
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:39 pm

Admin wrote:
Awww, she got her Pacey in the end. I love you

Rolling Eyes Yeah Veronica cause it's sooo possible to not love Logan. Silly girl.

Oh yeah, so like them not to official say they are back together. Those two are so damn good at avoiding conversation when they want to.

Hehe, Cary Grant. Gotta love Cary.

"Bachelor of Blackmail and Espionage” <----Veronica would ace that one.

Awww, Veronica told him to go to the party and he didn't go. He's so sweet.

Good lord how many "awww's" are you gonna get out of me. The whole "covering her heart" thing....Awwww. I want a Logan.

"Spread 'em babe"<----Yeah, um......give me a minute. I'm kinda fantasizing about Logan/Me smut.

Lord, Veronica, if the boy offers oral sex you say yes. I don't care if hes offering it in the middle of your school caffeteria. The answer is always YES!!! lol!

“See baby, you can’t fight it.” <----Veronica and me both lol

“God, Logan. Please. Want you…inside of, of me,” <----I know the feeling lol!

Note to the author: Stop being such a baby. It was sweet & hot and I demand you finish it now! The queen has spoken.


Thanks for all the feedback.

lol! Best. Cafeteria. Table. Ever. lol! Razz

It'll be done soon.
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:41 pm

PrincessBella24 wrote:
I really liked it. It was sweet! The heart thing melted me, completly. Only Logan could make such a sexual move and have us all go AWWW.
I really liked the Logan-chocolate combination. You cant go wrong w that one Razz
I like how playful it was, cause i really do love angst free smut.
The tease of the smut you gave us (Evil) was seriously hot. Veronica is so stupid sometimes "Someone could walk by.."*says in a high pitch voice* Who cares! Rolling Eyes
I really liked it, and im reaaaaaaaaaaaly hoping you dont stop there.


He is a sweetie...usually. Razz

Yeah after reading shangra_la' new WIP, I don't think I could stand to read or write any angst, that fic has enough angst for the entire fandom. geek

There'll be more, I still have to get them "lost in the dark" or whatever.
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:43 pm

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Thanks for all the feedback.

lol! Best. Cafeteria. Table. Ever. lol! Razz

It'll be done soon.


Any time.

Amen to that! lol!

Yay!
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:45 pm

marsbarz88 wrote:
PrincessBella24 wrote:
I really liked it. It was sweet! The heart thing melted me, completly. Only Logan could make such a sexual move and have us all go AWWW.
I really liked the Logan-chocolate combination. You cant go wrong w that one Razz
I like how playful it was, cause i really do love angst free smut.
The tease of the smut you gave us (Evil) was seriously hot. Veronica is so stupid sometimes "Someone could walk by.."*says in a high pitch voice* Who cares! Rolling Eyes
I really liked it, and im reaaaaaaaaaaaly hoping you dont stop there.


He is a sweetie...usually. Razz

Yeah after reading shangra_la' new WIP, I don't think I could stand to read or write any angst, that fic has enough angst for the entire fandom. geek

There'll be more, I still have to get them "lost in the dark" or whatever.


And apparently so are you. When you write geek

I really like the way you described everything. Your writing always has that. Like when you say "She watched the fire as the embers flared and flamed, the image reflecting back through the mirror of her own azure orbs" That´s pretty perfect.

Oh yeah, that has enough angst fo a year.

Uhhhh, i cant wait.
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:07 pm

PrincessBella24 wrote:
And apparently so are you. When you write geek

I really like the way you described everything. Your writing always has that. Like when you say "She watched the fire as the embers flared and flamed, the image reflecting back through the mirror of her own azure orbs" That´s pretty perfect.

Oh yeah, that has enough angst fo a year.

Uhhhh, i cant wait.


Don't compliment remember, its awkward, only when you do it though. Razz

Thanks. Embarassed

Uh huh.

Good, then you can comment on lj for me right? I need at least 1 reply. geek
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:14 pm

marsbarz88 wrote:
PrincessBella24 wrote:
And apparently so are you. When you write geek

I really like the way you described everything. Your writing always has that. Like when you say "She watched the fire as the embers flared and flamed, the image reflecting back through the mirror of her own azure orbs" That´s pretty perfect.

Oh yeah, that has enough angst fo a year.

Uhhhh, i cant wait.


Don't compliment remember, its awkward, only when you do it though. Razz

Thanks. Embarassed

Uh huh.

Good, then you can comment on lj for me right? I need at least 1 reply. geek


Yeah, idk why tho geek Well, lets say i was talking about this other writer. Betty. She is really good Very Happy

I cannot Rolling Eyes enough. geek

Well, that´s a given, but i know i wont be the only one. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:22 pm

PrincessBella24 wrote:
Yeah, idk why tho geek Well, lets say i was talking about this other writer. Betty. She is really good Very Happy

I cannot Rolling Eyes enough. geek

Well, that´s a given, but i know i wont be the only one. Smile


That I can agree with, Betty is great. geek

lol! Thought youmight say something like that. Razz

Hopefully.
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:28 pm

marsbarz88 wrote:
PrincessBella24 wrote:
Yeah, idk why tho geek Well, lets say i was talking about this other writer. Betty. She is really good Very Happy

I cannot Rolling Eyes enough. geek

Well, that´s a given, but i know i wont be the only one. Smile


That I can agree with, Betty is great. geek

lol! Thought youmight say something like that. Razz

Hopefully.


Betty RULEZ! lol! And you know what i like about her, other than everything? geek That she is so confident. I admire her. Very Happy

It was the only adecuate response. geek

Omg! I laugh cause i think you are kidding but the lack of smilies tells me otherwise. You big whiner. geek Its LoVe and its smut. Do you really think you´ll have just a few reviews? You would, if Betty wasnt so annoyingly talented. geek
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:33 pm

PrincessBella24 wrote:
Betty RULEZ! lol! And you know what i like about her, other than everything? geek That she is so confident. I admire her. Very Happy

It was the only adecuate response. geek

Omg! I laugh cause i think you are kidding but the lack of smilies tells me otherwise. You big whiner. geek Its LoVe and its smut. Do you really think you´ll have just a few reviews? You would, if Betty wasnt so annoyingly talented. geek


lol! Hm, is that a hint at something? Razz

Rolling Eyes Poor eye rolling smilie must be tired. geek

Hey its not like fics always get reviews. geek I'm sure I will, I was just trying to be real about it. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:43 pm

marsbarz88 wrote:
PrincessBella24 wrote:
Betty RULEZ! lol! And you know what i like about her, other than everything? geek That she is so confident. I admire her. Very Happy

It was the only adecuate response. geek

Omg! I laugh cause i think you are kidding but the lack of smilies tells me otherwise. You big whiner. geek Its LoVe and its smut. Do you really think you´ll have just a few reviews? You would, if Betty wasnt so annoyingly talented. geek


lol! Hm, is that a hint at something? Razz

Rolling Eyes Poor eye rolling smilie must be tired. geek

Hey its not like fics always get reviews. geek I'm sure I will, I was just trying to be real about it. Razz


No hint. Im flat out telling Betty that i love her writing. But just Betty. Razz

It doesnt roll anymore. Its unmotivated geek

Your fics do. Very Happy Here´s me being real: Betty will kick ass Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:44 pm

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No hint. Im flat out telling Betty that i love her writing. But just Betty. Razz

It doesnt roll anymore. Its unmotivated geek

Your fics do. Very Happy Here´s me being real: Betty will kick ass Smile


Oh, fine by me. Razz

lol! lol!

Aww, I'm sure Betty's touched. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Marshmallow Fluff   Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:56 pm

marsbarz88 wrote:
PrincessBella24 wrote:
No hint. Im flat out telling Betty that i love her writing. But just Betty. Razz

It doesnt roll anymore. Its unmotivated geek

Your fics do. Very Happy Here´s me being real: Betty will kick ass Smile


Oh, fine by me. Razz

lol! lol!

Aww, I'm sure Betty's touched. Razz


Very Happy Like i care geek

geek

Do you even know how badly i want to call you Betty right now? lol!
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