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PostSubject: KB/JD Fic -can't think of a title :p   Mon May 19, 2008 9:37 pm

Okay so this is for mojo. Keep in mind that I wrote it during class this morning and just typed it up. I'll edit and probably write more before I post it.

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It’s been forty-five days, fifteen hours, and some seconds since Jason last wore his ring. At first he thought he’d feel empty, lonelier. And for the first few days he did, but wallowing in self-pity – the “what ifs” of the past – had never been his way. Nope, Jason Dohring was not one to wallow; the proverbial glass was still standing there, and it was most definitely half full, maybe even two thirds full – a shiny, tall glass filled with…possibilities.

Still, the one event that had shocked him, what he hadn’t foreseen – more so than his divorce even – was the cancellation of Moonlight. It was like last year all over again. Sure, he and some of the cast, Alex, and Sophia vowed to stay in touch, and that cushioned the blow a bit. But Jason knew that eventually they’d all get new jobs, maybe in L.A., maybe in New York and “staying in touch” would soon become the equivalence of shooting over an email every month or so.

At least, after three years on Veronica Mars, he had gotten used to the strange medley of emotions that surrounded the month of May, that extreme anxiety and inevitable optimism always enveloped him when the network Upfronts began.

He’d been in New York for a day, arriving just in time to hear the news of the show’s cancellation. At least the cast had all gotten to spend some quality time together. After the news, they all went out for dinner and drinks.

In the morning Jason decided to wake up early and walk around, to really experience the city. It was the first day of the rest of his life or whatever other damn cliché and he planned to find out what possibilities might be in store.

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He was on the corner of Broadway and Fifth, finishing an apple he’d purchased at the street market, when he spotted her. At first he wasn’t sure but then she smiled and well, he’d know that smile anywhere. She was wearing some blue jogging outfit and judging by the road blocks and numerous crew members on the sidewalk, they were filming.

Jason stared from across the street, transfixed as he watched the scene play out. When he finally heard a firm “cut” called out, he made him way over, his heart fluttering a tick faster as he approached.
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PostSubject: Re: KB/JD Fic -can't think of a title :p   Mon May 19, 2008 9:45 pm

Awww,Marsie!!!It's so lovely!All the possibilities! I love you The ring and the apple I love you I can't wait to see the full fic,cause you are going to make a fic of it,right? Smile Thanks for dedication,not that I forced you or anything..... lol! Love it!
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PostSubject: Re: KB/JD Fic -can't think of a title :p   Mon May 19, 2008 9:47 pm

Ok, you need to turn that ficlet into a fic. Like yesterday Razz
It´s all in the details: The ring, the month of may (which i really do think must be the worst month of the year for him), the apple he was eating wich reminds me of Logan and Struck, he is always eating them, what´s up with that? And he saw her! Awwww, its like it can really happen!!!
This is so good!! Do you even know how good you are? I mean, often times i think that you are just a drunk with nothing to offer and then you do things like this, and remind me that even though you are one, you are one hell of a writer. geek
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PostSubject: Re: KB/JD Fic -can't think of a title :p   Mon May 19, 2008 9:48 pm

Mojo wrote:
Awww,Marsie!!!It's so lovely!All the possibilities! I love you The ring and the apple I love you I can't wait to see the full fic,cause you are going to make a fic of it,right? Smile Thanks for dedication,not that I forced you or anything..... lol! Love it!


Well I feel like writing more so it'll probably get a lot longer. First I have to find a way to "kill off Dax" Twisted Evil geek
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PostSubject: Re: KB/JD Fic -can't think of a title :p   Mon May 19, 2008 9:50 pm

PrincessBella24 wrote:
Ok, you need to turn that ficlet into a fic. Like yesterday Razz
It´s all in the details: The ring, the month of may (which i really do think must be the worst month of the year for him), the apple he was eating wich reminds me of Logan and Struck, he is always eating them, what´s up with that? And he saw her! Awwww, its like it can really happen!!!
This is so good!! Do you even know how good you are? I mean, often times i think that you are just a drunk with nothing to offer and then you do things like this, and remind me that even though you are one, you are one hell of a writer. geek


Awww, somewhere amidst the insults there was a compliment right? Razz Thanks, I think I'm gonna write more since my muse is finally cooperating.
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PostSubject: Re: KB/JD Fic -can't think of a title :p   Mon May 19, 2008 9:56 pm

marsbarz88 wrote:

Well I feel like writing more so it'll probably get a lot longer. First I have to find a way to "kill off Dax" Twisted Evil geek

Yay! bounce KILL HIM!!!KILL HIM!!!! Twisted Evil ...off I mean,naturally lol! But seriously,isn't seeing Jason a reason enough for her to go all 'Dax who? confused ' Razz Just let me know when you post it,like send me a PM or sth,cause I'm not gonna be here Sad
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PostSubject: Re: KB/JD Fic -can't think of a title :p   Mon May 19, 2008 9:58 pm

Mojo wrote:
marsbarz88 wrote:

Well I feel like writing more so it'll probably get a lot longer. First I have to find a way to "kill off Dax" Twisted Evil geek

Yay! bounce KILL HIM!!!KILL HIM!!!! Twisted Evil ...off I mean,naturally lol! But seriously,isn't seeing Jason a reason enough for her to go all 'Dax who? confused ' Razz Just let me know when you post it,like send me a PM or sth,cause I'm not gonna be here Sad


Yeah I might just pretend that Dax *vommits* does not exist. I can email it to you if you want, just send my your email...I might have it though or I can PM it whatever.
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PostSubject: Re: KB/JD Fic -can't think of a title :p   Mon May 19, 2008 10:00 pm

marsbarz88 wrote:
PrincessBella24 wrote:
Ok, you need to turn that ficlet into a fic. Like yesterday Razz
It´s all in the details: The ring, the month of may (which i really do think must be the worst month of the year for him), the apple he was eating wich reminds me of Logan and Struck, he is always eating them, what´s up with that? And he saw her! Awwww, its like it can really happen!!!
This is so good!! Do you even know how good you are? I mean, often times i think that you are just a drunk with nothing to offer and then you do things like this, and remind me that even though you are one, you are one hell of a writer. geek


Awww, somewhere amidst the insults there was a compliment right? Razz Thanks, I think I'm gonna write more since my muse is finally cooperating.


No, its not a compliment, its the truth Very Happy Awww Crying or Very sad i was looking forward to that beating, damn her. geek
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PostSubject: Re: KB/JD Fic -can't think of a title :p   Mon Jun 16, 2008 1:01 am

Updated my KB/JD fic is anyone wants to read, here.
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