-Okay, here is what I have so far. I'm trying to make Piz sound like he did on the show....you know...delusional, nieve, unable to get that Veronica was not the girl he imagined her to be in his pathetic little dreams. Oh and this is from Piz's POV so he will be thinking of Logan & LoVe in a negative light so be ready for that....and no the smut is not written yet. Grow up!


Piz happily bounded from his car, his hair flopping in the early morning light. Today was a good day. His first good day in over a month. He had been in a funk ever since Veronica had arrived home from her summer internship and ended their relationship, shortly there after she had taken back up with non other than Logan Echolls.

Though his parents had taught him to see the good in everybody, try as he might he could never understand what Veronica saw in Logan. Near as Piz could tell Logan was a lazy jerk who enjoyed booze, women, surfing, and beating the crap out of innocent people. He was hardly the type who deserved an intelligent and beautiful woman like Veronica. She was too smart for Logan, too kind, too moral, she had too much potential.

Not that it really mattered anymore. Just the other night-much to his surprise and delight- Logan and Veronica had imploded. Big time. Right in the middle of campus, yelling their heads off, half of what they said not making any kind of sense, at least not to him. And when Veronica had made to storm away Logan had hooked a hand around her elbow and pulled her back-something about her not running this time- effectively starting round two, oblivious to the gawking crowd.

Round two had ended when Logan shot off a comment about how Veronica would open her legs for him, but she’d be goddamned if she opened her heart. Veronica had responded by laying a surprisingly powerful slap to Logan’s left cheek. They’d stood there, facing each other, eyes blazing, chests heaving. Piz had taken a cautious step forward, unsure if he should step in, but Wallace had stopped him with a firm hand on his shoulder. They had watched as Veronica spun on her heels and stormed away, not bothering to give a backwards glance. Logan had lingered a bit longer, doing what Piz thought was a great impression of a caged tiger, before storming off to his car. Minutes later there had been a squeal of tires as two cars barreled out of the student parking lot.

Piz had stared after them in near disbelief while Wallace had rolled his eyes and walked away, muttering under his breath, something about love being grand. Piz however couldn’t believe that what he’d just witnessed could be construed as love in any way, shape, or form. They were a dysfunctional mess. What had Veronica been thinking when she took him back?

Still muddling over Logan’s continued presence in Veronica’s life Piz approached her front door. His plan was to be her friend. She was going to be vulnerable from her most recent breakup with Logan, so he’d ease into it, a few walks with her and backup & movie night with the gang, give her time to heal and realize she was better off without Logan, and then he’d make his move.

Upon arriving at Veronica’s front door Piz was started to find it open. Poking his head in he discover the kitchen and living room to be empty, save for Backup who was sprawled out on the couch. Suddenly voices sounded from Veronica’s room. It seemed like Logan had shown up looking for another fight. Why couldn’t that jerk just leave her alone?

Cautiously, Piz stepped into the Mars’ apartment, ever mindful of the pit bull lounging on the sofa. While Backup had never been aggressive towards him, the dog still made him nervous. Pit bulls could be vicious killers if they wanted and Piz was sneaking into the house. He froze instantly when Backup shifted, lifting his head, meeting Piz’s gaze with an assessing eye before dismissing him as insignificant. Once sure that Backup had settled back down Piz continued his trek to Veronica’s room.

I like it. I think you have Piz's voice down, I can see him saying/thinking that way about LoVe since he really knows nothing about Veronica and Logan's past, save what Wallace divulged. I have a question though, are you planning on making Piz seem like the bad guy here or are do you want it to be more neutral (<--not sure that's the right word) in the fic since its from his POV?

I really liked it. I loved the twisted image he has of Veronica. Too moral He really doesnt see that Logan and Veronica are the same. I love how he had everythtign planned, like when to give her space, and when to make his move. He is so naive, that it´s almost endearing, if it wasnt so funny.
And i just know, afte that fight the smut is going to be super hot.
I loved it. Now finish it already!